Jorg,I really like this song.Really catchy from the getgo.It keeps your attention throughout the whole song and presents its self nicely.I would love to hear some background vocals/harmonies built in.You got 4 stars on lyrics cause you haven't writen them yet.Silly.If you do,try to put the song layout(intro/1st verse /chorus/Bridge)that way when someone Criteques your songs they can be more specific when they comment.Just food for thought.
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Jorg,I really like this song.Really catchy from the getgo.It keeps your attention throughout the whole song and presents its self nicely.I would love to hear some background vocals/harmonies built in.You got 4 stars on lyrics cause you haven't writen them yet.Silly.If you do,try to put the song layout(intro/1st verse /chorus/Bridge)that way when someone Criteques your songs they can be more specific when they comment.Just food for thought. //////////////////////////P E A C E\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\